SOP-49: Video Outreach & Proposal Production Protocol
AutomationSurgeon Direct Business — Loom Video System
| Version | 1.0 |
| Owner | Anton |
| Trigger | Phase 2 of the daily 90-minute sales loop (SOP-36), prospect follow-up after an audit, proposal delivery |
| Purpose | To standardize every Loom video produced for AutomationSurgeon direct business outreach — cold first-touch, post-audit proposals, and delivery walkthroughs. Ensures consistent brand narrative, visual presentation, and a single CTA per video. |
Note: This SOP covers direct business outreach only. Upwork is a separate track with its own video production system. Do not mix credibility signals, CTAs, or delivery methods between the two.
STEP 1: The Decision Matrix — When to Record and What Script to Use
Use this matrix to map what you observe about a prospect to the correct script.
1.1. Cold Outreach Looms (First Touch)
These are 60–90 second screen-share videos sent via LinkedIn or email. They open with a real finding from the prospect's domain or environment and end with a single, low-friction CTA.
| If you observe... | Use this script | Reference |
|---|---|---|
| Broken, missing, or "none"-policy DMARC / SPF / DKIM on prospect's domain | Email Deliverability first-touch | SOP-15 Section 3.1 |
| Job posting for data entry, approval coordinator, or manual operations role; or website language signaling manual workflows | Workflow Automation first-touch | SOP-15 Section 3.2 |
| Company is 20–500 employees on M365, no visible security hardening, device management, or compliance posture | M365 Infrastructure first-touch | SOP-15 Section 3.3 |
| Government contractor, defense, healthcare with federal contracts, or explicit CMMC / FedRAMP / HIPAA need | M365 Infrastructure script, adapted for compliance angle | SOP-15 Section 3.3 + GCC High framing from SOP-01 |
When NOT to record a Loom: Standard LinkedIn text message is faster and still effective for high-volume outreach. Use Loom when you have a specific visual finding to show — a broken DNS record, a relevant process on their website, or a Secure Score analogy. Loom without a visual anchor is just a talking head. Use the text scripts (SOP-13) for those.
1.2. Proposal Looms (Post-Audit)
After delivering a Tier 0.5 audit report, record a 2–4 minute Loom that walks through the findings before sending the written proposal.
| Audit Type | Loom Purpose | Length |
|---|---|---|
| Email Deliverability Assessment | Walk through the broken records, show what each one means, preview the fix | 2–3 min |
| M365 Zero Trust Health Check | Walk through the scorecard, explain the red/yellow items, preview the remediation roadmap | 3–4 min |
| Azure FinOps Cost Optimization Audit | Walk through the identified waste categories, show the projected savings, preview the fix options | 3–4 min |
1.3. Delivery Looms (Post-Project)
Handoff Looms are part of every project delivery package (governed by SOP-03). Reference: - Tier 1: 5–10 minute Loom walkthrough - Tier 2: 10–15 minute Loom with technical details - Tier 3: 15–20 minute comprehensive Loom
STEP 2: The AutomationSurgeon Hook (Memorize)
Every outreach Loom MUST open with this hook in the first 10–15 seconds before diving into the specific script.
"Hi, I'm Anton from AutomationSurgeon. I secure and modernize Microsoft 365 environments, then automate the operations that eat up IT teams' time. I'm a Microsoft Partner, 8x certified, and I've delivered 40+ successful projects."
Then transition immediately into the specific script from SOP-15.
Credibility signals for direct business (use these, not Upwork signals):
| Use This | Not This |
|---|---|
| "Microsoft Partner, ID 7036966" | "Top Rated on Upwork" |
| "8x Microsoft Certified" | "100% Job Success Score" |
| "40+ successful projects" | "31+ Upwork projects" |
| "Military Veteran" (optional, strong trust signal) | — |
Why: Direct business clients don't know or care about Upwork. Microsoft Partner status is verifiable and carries weight in the M365/Azure space.
STEP 3: The Visual Anchor Strategy
Do not just talk to a blank screen. Use the screen share to show a real finding or a relevant visual every time.
3.1. For Cold Outreach Looms
- Before recording: Pull up the actual finding on screen — MXToolbox DNS lookup, email header analysis, or a screenshot of an M365 Secure Score range
- Screen layout: Fullscreen on the finding. Loom camera bubble in the bottom corner (not covering key data)
- Point and guide: As you narrate, use your cursor to highlight the specific issue
- "Here's the DMARC record — or rather, the absence of one" → circle the empty field
- "This 'p=none' means emails are allowed through even if they fail authentication" → point to the policy value
- Let numbers land: Pause after delivering the stat. "Five to zero-point-four percent bounce rate." [pause] Silence emphasizes the metric.
3.2. For Proposal Looms
- Open the written audit report PDF or scorecard on screen
- Walk through it section by section — "Here's what we found, here's what it means, here's what fixing it looks like"
- Show the before/after projection, not just the problem
- End on the proposal: "The written version of everything I just covered is in the email below — along with pricing and next steps."
3.3. For Delivery Looms
- Screen share the live system or dashboard you just built
- Click through each component — show it working, not just describe it
- Cover: what it does, how to use it, what to do if something breaks
- End with: "If anything looks different from what we agreed or something isn't working right, reply directly to this email and I'll fix it same day."
STEP 4: Production Standards
- Environment: Quiet background. Dedicated microphone. Audio quality is a subconscious indicator of professional competence — bad audio kills credibility faster than anything else.
- Tone: Conversational and diagnostic, not sales-y. You are showing someone a problem they have, not begging for a meeting.
- Length:
- Cold outreach: 60–90 seconds maximum. Do not exceed 2 minutes.
- Proposal: 2–4 minutes.
- Delivery: 5–20 minutes (tier-dependent per SOP-03).
- CTA — one per video, specific:
- Correct: "Send me your domain and I'll run a free full audit today."
- Correct: "The written proposal is in the email — let me know if you want to get started."
- Correct: "Reply here if anything looks off and I'll fix it same day."
- Wrong: "Let me know if you have any questions." (no action, no commitment)
STEP 5: Delivery
5.1. Cold Outreach Looms
Channel: LinkedIn direct message (preferred) or email (if address is available)
Message wrapper (LinkedIn):
"Hi [Name] — recorded a quick 60-second observation about [Company]'s [email setup / M365 environment / workflow]. Worth a look: [Loom link]"
Keep the text wrapper short. The video does the work. Do not summarize the video in the text — make them click play.
Tracking: Log in the daily outreach spreadsheet (SOP-36): - Company, contact, date, Loom link, channel (LinkedIn / email), response (Y/N/later)
5.2. Proposal Looms
Delivery: Embed the Loom link at the top of the proposal email, above the written content.
Email structure: 1. Subject: "Your [audit type] findings — [Company]" 2. Opening line: "I recorded a 3-minute walkthrough of everything I found. Link below — the written version follows." 3. Loom link (prominent, not buried) 4. Written audit summary 5. Proposal with pricing and next steps 6. CTA: "Reply to this email or book a call here: [Calendly link]"
5.3. Delivery Looms
Delivery: Part of the project delivery package per SOP-03. Sent via email alongside the written documentation.
STEP 6: Follow-Up
| Timeline | Action |
|---|---|
| Day 1 | Send Loom via LinkedIn / email |
| Day 4 | LinkedIn follow-up text: "Did you get a chance to watch the video?" — keep it short |
| Day 8 | Final touch: reference what the video showed + offer the free audit CTA one more time |
| Day 8+ | Move to inactive, revisit in 30 days if no response |
Do not follow up more than 3 times on a cold outreach Loom. Persistence past 3 touches damages the brand.
STEP 7: Success Metrics
| Metric | Target |
|---|---|
| Cold Loom response rate | 20%+ |
| Proposal Loom open rate | 80%+ (email open) |
| Proposal Loom → booked call | 40%+ |
| Delivery Loom satisfaction | 4.5/5+ (post-project survey) |